Thursday, August 03, 2006

Still Life



The first line of my still life poem will be:

"The apples don't know what they want."

3 Comments:

Blogger LKD said...

I don't know if you'll take this as a compliment or an insult, but your first line sounds very Billy to me.

I just read Kathryn's still life and was impressed. Where's yours? Mine's still in my head.

8/04/2006 10:37 PM  
Blogger Don said...

Wouldn't a still life have just description, no action to it? What does "still" mean in poetry?

8/07/2006 10:35 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Yeah, probably, Don. But I think we can be lose with it. The next thing I'm going to suggest is a self-portrait. But I'm not sure the one I write will be about me.

You know?

8/07/2006 4:26 PM  

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