Assignment/Exercise
Take two image-heavy poems you've written and fit their lines together as you would if you were lacing the fingers of two hands.
Poem number 1
Poem number 2
Lines folded together
Now go back and cut and add and change to make the new poem work. Does this new poem now have any unexpected leaps?
Poem number 1
Poem number 2
Lines folded together
Now go back and cut and add and change to make the new poem work. Does this new poem now have any unexpected leaps?
posted by Anonymous at 11:43 PM
2 Comments:
The photographs below disturb me so much that I really can't talk about it.
But I love the photos of your hand.
It's heartening to see a man who actually wears his band.
Good exercise. Have you given it a shot?
Yeah, the exercise can work. Downside is that it takes two to make one. Upside: sometimes the one is better or wilder.
Didn't mean to disturb.
And of course the band.
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