By using Ariadne's suggestions I found this:
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Was that a Billy Collins-ish poem?
Except for the question in line 6, I thought maybe it was.
Glenn and Theo sort of agreed with me.
Now I'm going to go revise it.
(Ariadne's suggestions)
Was that a Billy Collins-ish poem?
Except for the question in line 6, I thought maybe it was.
Glenn and Theo sort of agreed with me.
Now I'm going to go revise it.
(Ariadne's suggestions)
posted by Anonymous at 8:39 PM
2 Comments:
Yeah, Collins-ish. "these noises are less / than a life or a death / and I have a blanket." heh ... it's Martin-ish, too. ... fun.
Just while I was reading your poem Bob Hass & Brenda Hillman walked into Claremont branch with the grandkids. Seems they need new library cards.
Thanks, Glenn.
Hey, Hass and Hillman remind me, I think I'm going to go to Squaw Valley this summer.
Oh, and I continue to enjoy reading your musings, statements, revisions, etc at lovesettlement.
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